Wednesday, October 9, 2013

Student Writing Pieces!!

As per my last to last blog,I had promised I would post a few of my kids' writing pieces on the topic.Here are two of them.

                     
Dungar Chundawat.

Role of Men and Women In the Society

                 Man is a social animal,he can't stay alone in this world.People stay together in the society so that they can solve each others' problems. In some places there is inequality and gender bias.Men and women are equal,they both need to obtain knowledge,learn and share their opinions.Everyone has freedom of choice.If the country is independent,then people should also be independent.
               Independence was not to just get free from the British but also changing the mindset of Indians and fighting against injustice.During freedom,girls were getting educated. Women like Savitribai Phule, Raja Ram Mohan Roy, Ramabai Ranade fought for the education of girls.The girls were getting education but they used to do household work,teaching or nursing.
               During the partition,women suffered due to riots.Prostitution was happening,women were being sold.Then there were women like Kiran Bedi- the first IPS officer, Kalpana Chawla - the first Indian astronaut to go to space,Sudha Murthy - first woman engineer to work in Telco,Indira Gandhi - first woman Prime Minister of India, Rani Laxmibai who fought bravely against the British. These women fought for true independence.Apart from work today women also take additional responsibilities.
           In a democratic country everyone has a right to choose.Some parents force their choices upon their children.Human beings live their own life.Women play a part in improving the society.Women need their own identity.Both men and women are capable of doing similar jobs.They can work hand in hand and should get equal opportunities.
       I think they need not apply for different jobs as they are capable of doing similar jobs.
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A funny hilarious one by Yash Solanki ;)
(Don't miss Kareena)

Autobiography of a Saree
         I was  __________. Do you want to know what I was? I was a saree. I was in a stark purple and red colour.There were lots of sarees but I was the best one.I was kept inside for a long time and then transported with others.
         A man came,he chose me .His name was Yash Solanki.I was kept in a box. It was so hot,Yash kept driving his car and I was bored.Then he took me out and kept me in the cupboard and I got lots of friends but they all were suits.I waiting for him to take me out. On Valentine's day he took me out and gifted me to his girlfriend. Do you want to know the name of his girlfriend? Her name was Kareena Kapoor. He had proposed her .They both were considerate people.On seeing me she said "What a nice saree?"
     She was very happy but then after some days I got suspicious.She stopped liking me and liked other sarees.
     One day she had kept me outside.A cat came and ruined me. I was so sad.She asked Yash to throw away the saree. They both put me in a box and threw me in a bad bad territory. The place had a very bad odour. I just sat there thinking,once upon a time I was the best saree.

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Vanshika
         (Letter to cheer a friend who has failed exams)
     Hi Priyanka,
    I have learned from your teacher that you got less marks in your exam.I know how you are feeling now because I have also experienced the same.
    However I have learn't that "Failing is a challenge,accept it."I followed the quote when I failed.It really helped me.I think you also should take lessons from this quote.
    I also want to sit with you for and hour and lets work together.I am sure that I can teach you something.I will give my best to help you.I know you can do it.
                                                                                                                                 Your loving friend
                                                                                                                                         Vanshika


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Muskan
    Should Women get all the right that men have?    
          Hi I am Muskan and I think that women should get all the right that men get.You see that women are fighting for their education like Malala.A women Aung Saun Su Ki,stayed away from family for 15 years and fought diseases like TB and kept fighting for her country.
   Women can be emperors.Everbody has to understand that boys are born because of girls.If we will change only then the world will change.   
 

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More to come soon. I will keep posting the writing pieces of the kids!

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